Descriptive Writing:
Get a mood card from Ms. Farrell.
You will sit outside, or where you can look outside and write a detailed description of what you see.
Keep in mind the mood you are supposed to be creating in your reader when choosing your adjectives.
7 comments:
(dreamy) The rythimic rustling of the leaves on the thicket of trees sings me a lulaby. THeir slender trunks sway heavily in the breeze. The tiny pieces of clear blue sky peeking through the leaves is an escape to a place of serenity. The sun's rays play on the leaves above, out of sight. The scene resembles that of an artist with a grat appreciation of naturs mos subtle beauties
(thankful) As I look outside my window i see a lot of things going on. I see stray dogs, people walking,kids that left/lost their keys so they are locked out of the house, and kids without jackets. While I am looking at all these things I realize how thankful I am.I am very thankful being able to see my dog with a safe home, where he doesn't have to search for food. Also I am thankful that my mom can afford a car to get us from point A to point B. Another thing I am thankful for is my mom for reminding me to grab my keys in the morning so i will not get locked outside in the cold. Finally, I am most thankful for the clothes that I have. Always remember some people have nothing. Be grateful for what you do have.:)
(Ecstatic) Oh my God is it snowing? Last time it snowed was like in December of last year. Remember that time it snowed last year and we was throwing snowballs at the cars going down the street then we duck off from them so they wouldn't catch us? I really hope it snows for more than 3 hours because you know Georgia and its bi-polar weather.
Good starts, but be careful of basic grammar and spelling rules.
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